2013年5月26日 星期日

Peace

World without war is peace,
Children run on the field in grace,
Meditation is a state of peace,
Starting a new day with peace.
 
Peace is when someone cares for you,
Peace is when you are meditating,
Peace is happiness we are looking for,
Peace is  a state of mind.

Listening to soft music is a peace,
Life is a race,
Maybe you can escape the conflict,
But peace never dies.

Peace is a noun but a state,
Peace is a  word but a feeling,
Peace is a state,
And the world without war is peace.

Brief description:
First, the poem is about to define the meaning of peace. Peace is easily to find if we pay a little attention on the environment we live in.Therefore, I wrote this poem mainly about peace while I was thinking how to express the emotion of peace through words.


 
 
 
 



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  1. Original

    World without war is peace,
    Children run on the field in grace,
    Meditation is a state of peace,
    Starting a new day with peace.

    Peace is when someone care for you,
    Peace is when you are meditating,
    Peace is happiness we are looking for,
    Peace is a state of mind.

    Listening to soft music is a peace,
    Life is a race,
    Maybe you can escape the conflict,
    But peace never die.

    Peace is a noun but a state,
    Peace is a word but a feeling,
    Peace is a state,
    And the world without war is a peace.
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    World without war is peace,
    Children run on the field in grace,
    Meditation is a state of peace,
    Starting a new day with peace.

    Peace is when someone cares for you,
    Peace is when you are meditating,
    Peace is happiness we are looking for,
    Peace is a state of mind.

    Listening to soft music is a peace,
    Life is a race,
    Maybe you can escape the conflict,
    But peace never dies.

    Peace is a noun but a state,
    Peace is a word but a feeling,
    Peace is a state,
    And the world without war is a peace.

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