Ring!Ring!Ring!
The cooking show was about to begin.
Everyone clapped, Pia! Pia! Pia!
Cracking two eggs to the bowl,
Ko! Ko! Ko!
Stirring it with butter,sugar and flour,
Colo! Colo! Colo!
Putting flour paste on the waffler maker,
Waiting for a few minutes,
Bi!Bi! Bi!
A yummy dessert is ready to serve!
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Brief description:
Someday in the morning, I watched the cooking show, a chief was teaching how
to make a delicious waffle.That was really attractive and irresistable,especially for someone like me, who love to eat snack and pie.So,I tried to write a poem regarded my favorite food, that is waffle!!
Good try on this task. A few suggestions below.
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Turned on the Waffler maker,
Ring!Ring!Ring!
The cooking show was about to begin.
Everyone clapeed (clapped), Pia! Pia! Pia!
Cracking two eggs to the bowl,
Ko! Ko! Ko!
Stiring (stirring) it with butter,sugar and flour,
Colo! Colo! Colo!
Putting it (what is 'it' here?) on the waffler maker,
Waiting for a few minutes,
Bi!Bi! Bi!
A yummy dessert is ready to serve!