You are my sugar,
My only sugar.
You make me laugh loud,
When I am bored .
You`II never know, sweet,
How much I need you,
Please stay here with me for good.
Original Text:
You Are My Sunshine
My only sunshine.
You make me happy
When skies are grey.
You'll never know, dear,
How much I love you.
Please don't take my sunshine away
( Adapted on the song " You are my sunshine" and video resource: http://bit.ly/13klTuN )
Just a few tweaks
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You are my sugar,
My only sugar.
You make me smile, (change 'smile' , choose a two-syllabic word)
When I am boring . (bored- not boring)
You`II never know, darling, (change darling to a one-syllabic word)
How much I need you,
Please stay with me for good. (mind the rhythm here- count the syllables)
I just modified the syllables.
回覆刪除Thanks for the correction. :)